Posted on Friday, April 22, 2005 1:03 PM
#到了哪里
阳光中 一株植物在去年死去
为验证她的死亡
我一直等到今春的春末
她的尸体依然无动于衷
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# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
4/22/2005 2:20 PM by
maybe she's not died. Trees has several lifes. Most of the time, we're not patient enough to see her recovery.
# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
4/22/2005 3:17 PM by
When a plant died , she only lives in your brain.
I might believe that life could be transferred, from this plant to another one.
But that how, when, where or whether this "another one" would come to you, no idea, but she must be somewhere.
# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
4/22/2005 5:16 PM by
so you don't care about the plant. you care about the pot which you grow the plant in. and now the plant's died, you are about to transfer another plant into the pot, aren't you? Your pot's there, your pot won't change, your pot won't die.
# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
4/22/2005 5:25 PM by
I was nitpicking. anyway, quite enjoy your poem. Poetic people are rearly seen nowadays, glad that I saw one.:-)
# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
4/22/2005 5:53 PM by
Come on, emma. That's not a poem.
And what I wanna say in these words is , for example, when someone who had stayed with u for quite a long time left, he didn't just simply vanish, he did leave something behind with you, and you may not be sure what it is or how it will affect your ongoing life.
# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
4/22/2005 8:00 PM by
nod, it makes sense to me this time. :-)
# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
4/29/2005 9:19 PM by
这首歌歌词我很喜欢,唱的也好.
# re: 乌兰巴托的夜
11/21/2005 7:32 PM by
what I wanna say in these words is , for example, when someone who had stayed with u for quite a long time left, he didn't just simply vanish, he did leave something behind with you, and you may not be sure what it is or how it will affect your ongoing life.
严重共鸣!